Maori

In class miss idle came in class and and show room 6 this website we had a look at it is cool  have look.

In joy .  

In class,  we herd a big nose and every one rushed to the window in the middle of a PAT test. We had to stop the test because it was so noisy . We then all ran outside  to see what it was. It was the air force. Hope you enjoy.

Narritive Pre-test

In class we are did a practice for our Narritive writing test I hope you like mine!

Hi my name is Alice

One day I went to my room and I went to lie on my bed . I Turned my head to my door and right next to it  was this little door. I want to know what was in there where it leads to and it would be helpful if  we had a potion that turned me to a little person.   

But I just remembered that there was a one in a book I read and  I could not make it because I did not have the right ingredients. But that would take a long time to make but i will . . .

One  years later  I have finally made it.

Ok I just have to go to  school  and it is my birthday I am turning  12 years old .  

Twelve hours later  I came home and my potion was still there. I decided to drink it.  I closed my eyes and i felt weird.  I open my eyes and I look up   and I look down I'm in the carpet and  walk to the ladder  and I climbed up it.  I opened the door and I  fell down a deep hole.  I started screaming  but  I landed on a bed  i got up from the bed and went to another door ones i opend  and could  see a smiling cat,  a rabbit  and  a mouse  with a sword.

 And  then  they talk  about a person's  named the Mad Hatter. She asks,  “can i go home”. The mouse replies, “you can't go home  until  you finish your journey”.  My “what your  journey she”.   You go to the Mad Hatter  and he will help  you on the rest of your journey.  Quickly, go to the Mad Hatter be for  the Red Queen  finds you and cuts off your head.  

Go,  what are you waiting for  go,  ok ok, um do you have a horse or something else, yes we have h o o s e  you meant horse, ok, where is it .

Back at home  Alice’s Mum was wondering where she was. She went into her room and saw the potion and decided to have a drink.  She drank it and went in the door,  she did the same thing as Alice.   One second later Alice saw her mother, she ran to her and asked “how did you get here?”   

“Don’t worry, we’ve got to go home.”

“No, I have to help the white queen.”  

“What are you talking about?”

“ hmm, don't worry about  it .”

 Rabbit mouse look after her and don't let her out our site  alice alice alice don't worry mum i will come back  mum.  Mad  hatter mad hatter alice yes who there um the mad hatter . yay i need you  to help the  white queen ok  where do we go i do not know i thut you now    let's go to the red Queen ok lets 3 hours late  i want your head   mad hatter where do we find the sword in monster shed  ok let’s go  you and  i will hold her off  to buy you some time for you  no don’t go.

Where are they  ok go i will find the sound ok i find it

Let’s go mad hatter mad hatter let’s go to the white queen   4 to 3 hours later thank you .

Back at home alice wake up wake up umm what  there is a war we got to go outside  to the  place ok go go .

     

The End

We have been learning how to do a recount plan to prepare us for our writing. On the camp to Bridge Valley we will choose our most enjoyable activity each day and fill in a recount plan in our journals so we can write about it when we get back to school.  

We are learning to write a narrative and my theme is Anger.

Clay Model

We have been learning about Waharoa. This is my tile what do you think it means?

Description Paragraph

In class  we have been learning to write a descriptive paragraph. This is my paragraph hope you enjoy!

Brushed tail possum

Habitat

The brushtail possum lives in trees  in  the bush and they

Live  in  a hole  that some  other   animal  has  left .

Some live in the town.   They  are  in New Zealand  and  Australia

The seven kites

Last term we have been learning about the seven kites of Matariki. We join with room 1 and made some kites  in groups. We used material, bamboo, some wire, paper faces and some flax, feathers and more. This is my version of the story.

The seven kites

'I lost my kite' said the younger sister, 'oh where could it be,'

She cried. 'Don't worry little sister your kite is high in the sky with the other six,' said the older sister. She saw the seven stars and the younger sister said 'how wonderful!'

   

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Every Friday we do our topic and my buddy for this is Mia. This is what we have done so far.  We are learning about the history of Pounamu on the West Coast.
 

Ever second Monday Madeline comes in to room six.

We learned lots from her and she had inspired me to make a slideshow

about wolfs. Their  names are Ainu and Jake and I hope you like it .  

We are learning how persuasive writing is used  in advertisements

The persuasive language I uses in my advertisement are as follows: 

• a metaphor -  says something is something else. 

In my advertisement I used the example of 'Don't come to school flat'. 

• colloquialism - expresses something else than its literal meaning.

In my advertisement I used the example of "Just don't get caught".

My advertisement is about a backpack that can charge your chromebook. One day I will invent this!

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 welcome back every one

It  is 2017 now. It is  not 2016 so be happy! 

I have a new post 

for you

it is about the sea animals

the  box jellyfish. 

We are learning how to use stop motion animation to portray a story. For practice I did it using a skeleton.