We Need Headphones! By Bethiney
First reason why we need headphones, is when we all listen to the music without headphones so many class members will disagree with some of the music and that will cause arguments. Second reason why class members need headphones is when we do Reading Plus we can block out the noise from the background. If we do not have headphones we will get really poor results.
Third reason why we need headphones is if we are doing any quiet activities, it will block noise from outside that the little kids are making.
Fourth reason why class members should have music in the classroom is so they can enjoy their hard working day at school.
Fifth reason why we need headphones is so we can give the teacher some quiet time from us loud kids.
I Strongly believe so many classroom members should have headphones, there is a benefit for them.
Keep the headphones!
Well done with your argument Bethiney, you listened to advice and made changes. You have made your opinion very clear and given many reasons why. Next time you might be able to find some evidence to support your ideas.
ReplyDeleteYur wrighting is going of the page.
ReplyDeleteBY HANNAH
Hola Bethiney,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post about headphones! You gave some really good reasons as to why you think the classmates need them. This reminded me when our class had not enough headphones and we had to take turns! But most people have their own headphones now. Maybe something you could work on is making sure you manage the capital letters. I have learnt some stuff from Cybersmart sessions and I think that using all caps in a sentence feels like your yelling. So maybe try to cut down on them!
Gracias, Emily
Kia Ora Bethiney, I really like your persuasive writing. I think that was a very creative idea for you to mention that we need headphones to block out the little kids when they are playing outside. Oh, and you might want to just fix that little glitch with your writing is going off the page.
ReplyDelete-Anahera