In class we are did a practice for our Narritive writing test I hope you like mine!
Hi my name is Alice
One day I went to my room and I went to lie on my bed . I Turned my head to my door and right next to it was this little door. I want to know what was in there where it leads to and it would be helpful if we had a potion that turned me to a little person.
But I just remembered that there was a one in a book I read and I could not make it because I did not have the right ingredients. But that would take a long time to make but i will . . .
One years later I have finally made it.
Ok I just have to go to school and it is my birthday I am turning 12 years old .
Twelve hours later I came home and my potion was still there. I decided to drink it. I closed my eyes and i felt weird. I open my eyes and I look up and I look down I'm in the carpet and walk to the ladder and I climbed up it. I opened the door and I fell down a deep hole. I started screaming but I landed on a bed i got up from the bed and went to another door ones i opend and could see a smiling cat, a rabbit and a mouse with a sword.
And then they talk about a person's named the Mad Hatter. She asks, “can i go home”. The mouse replies, “you can't go home until you finish your journey”. My “what your journey she”. You go to the Mad Hatter and he will help you on the rest of your journey. Quickly, go to the Mad Hatter be for the Red Queen finds you and cuts off your head.
Go, what are you waiting for go, ok ok, um do you have a horse or something else, yes we have h o o s e you meant horse, ok, where is it .
Back at home Alice’s Mum was wondering where she was. She went into her room and saw the potion and decided to have a drink. She drank it and went in the door, she did the same thing as Alice. One second later Alice saw her mother, she ran to her and asked “how did you get here?”
“Don’t worry, we’ve got to go home.”
“No, I have to help the white queen.”
“What are you talking about?”
“ hmm, don't worry about it .”
Rabbit mouse look after her and don't let her out our site alice alice alice don't worry mum i will come back mum. Mad hatter mad hatter alice yes who there um the mad hatter . yay i need you to help the white queen ok where do we go i do not know i thut you now let's go to the red Queen ok lets 3 hours late i want your head mad hatter where do we find the sword in monster shed ok let’s go you and i will hold her off to buy you some time for you no don’t go.
Where are they ok go i will find the sound ok i find it
Let’s go mad hatter mad hatter let’s go to the white queen 4 to 3 hours later thank you .
Back at home alice wake up wake up umm what there is a war we got to go outside to the place ok go go .
The End
