I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
Hello Bethiney,I really enjoyed your post, especially the photo where you pointed out who you were. Maybe next time add in some commas into your texts, because I got a little confused about which dogs are which colours.Thank you for your amazing post.
Thank you Rosie, as you can see I have made some changes.Thanks for your feedback.
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Hello Bethiney,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your post, especially the photo where you pointed out who you were. Maybe next time add in some commas into your texts, because I got a little confused about which dogs are which colours.
Thank you for your amazing post.
Thank you Rosie, as you can see I have made some changes.Thanks for your feedback.
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